I completed by filming and realised by short film is only a minute long and makes little sense! I need to do more filming.
Problems I need to fix:
- there isn't enough set up in the opening, no knowledge of the character it just goes straight into him running around. I need the viewer to connect with him.
- I need to do a better mini montage introducing Alec and more of him getting ready.
- I break the 180-degree rule and it detracts from the scene.
- The timeline doesn't make sense if I'm still in the shower when alec is getting dressed and then I leave before him.
- there isn't enough dialogue between Nat and Alec, the characters don't connect.
Problems I need to fix:
- there isn't enough set up in the opening, no knowledge of the character it just goes straight into him running around. I need the viewer to connect with him.
- I need to do a better mini montage introducing Alec and more of him getting ready.
- I break the 180-degree rule and it detracts from the scene.
- The timeline doesn't make sense if I'm still in the shower when alec is getting dressed and then I leave before him.
- there isn't enough dialogue between Nat and Alec, the characters don't connect.
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